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Chris Buttimer, 8th Grade English
Taking a Standing Essay
Topic of the Week
Should secret wiretapping be legal?

Target Words
wiretapping
source
suspicious
notwithstanding
eliminate

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Assigning the
essay
Reflecting and sharing writing
Discussing
and comparing positions

Sample Lesson Clip 2 of 3

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- Student reflects on the topic of the week.

- Student shares an early draft of the assigned essay.

- Student also describes his plans for completing the essay.

[clip length—1:33]

STUDENT: People have their right to privacy. And, yeah, I— So yeah, mostly I felt a little bad because of the international thing, and people have their right to privacy. Government has tons of other sources to get information. But I do think that peop— then when it’s really certain that— that someone is planning something, eh, the government should be able to wiretap them if they have a warrant, if they get permission from a judge. I’m not against that.

CREW [off camera]: So do you feel prepared— like, you feel like you have a real position, you understand your position? And do you feel prepared to write about it? Um, can you read me what you wrote so far? I know you just started.

STUDENT: Oh, mostly what I said already. I don’t think covert wiretapping should be illegal. People have the basic right to have their privacy and respect, notwithstanding any—

CREW: Okay. And then, um, read me that first sentence again.

STUDENT: I don’t think pe— covert wiretapping should be— Wait. I don’t think covert wi— wiretapping should be legal.

CREW: Okay, great. And then, um, do you know— do you have any idea what you’re gonna write next?

STUDENT: Yeah. Um, uh, I’m gonna write that, uh, people— I’m gonna elaborate around the— the thing of innocent until proven guilty.

CREW: Okay, mm-hm.

STUDENT: Uh, I like to be on the side of the downtrodden. [chuckles]

CREW: Okay.

 

 

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